whaat, and here i thought the lettering and grammar were perfect XD... nah just kidding, i forgot to note here too, that lettering and dialogues are placeholders. i am writing the comic, but since i am croatian, and english is ultimately my second language, my friend and writer, ron marz will do the final rewrite to tweak the grammar, and troy peteri , top cows letterer will handle the lettering
awesome artwork. that lettering is pretty... well, not well done.... and after i wrote that i decided to read the other comments to see if anyone commented on it. and indeed someone did, plus your response. good to go.
Your art is amazing, but I find myself with some serious hatred for those text bubbles. The typesetting is irregular, and the bubbles really clash with the art instead of complimenting it. Something less obtrusive in that respect would be really beneficial.
don't concern yourself with that, this is just the placeholder text for ron marz to handle the rewrites, finally bubbles and text will be made by the incredibly skillful troy peteri, a professional comic book letterer