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ravine issue 1 page 26 by nebezial ravine issue 1 page 26 by nebezial
dialogue is temporary placeholder waiting for ron marz to finish the rewrite due to the fact that eloquent or not, english is my second language XD
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MarcusOTerra Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I kinda like choppy english in a fantasy campaign; like the 'common' tongue is everyone's second language and there's bits of grammar fault as they all use what they need and leave out what they don't care about.

That's me as a writer; try getting an editor behind that idea.
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R-mor Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is REALLY good. I love the design on the characters, and the dialogue is a lot funnier than I expected. English may not be your first language but I don't think I caught any major grammatical or spelling errors.
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trent-redfern Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
-goes looking for this comic in local comic shop soon after reading-
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEEEEH!!!
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Seenshadows Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Man I can't wait for this comic book to come out.
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CrowClaws Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LOVING it so far, can't wait to read more!
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KIANDRU Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
AWSOME STUFF. is very catchy and I almost lost myself into it. i like the world you have created!
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YeriDG Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Didn't that ghost thing say the guy needed a friend? Having a voice in your head always
scolding you must be pretty bothersome :D
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VeiledInShadow Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
lol i love this panel
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Redde67 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Its very awesome comics and im ur greates fan but I lost when I read. I mean storrytelling))
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NemoEstPerficio Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Want More T_T
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