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ravine issue 1 page 26 by nebezial ravine issue 1 page 26 by nebezial
dialogue is temporary placeholder waiting for ron marz to finish the rewrite due to the fact that eloquent or not, english is my second language XD
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MarcusOTerra Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I kinda like choppy english in a fantasy campaign; like the 'common' tongue is everyone's second language and there's bits of grammar fault as they all use what they need and leave out what they don't care about.

That's me as a writer; try getting an editor behind that idea.
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R-mor Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is REALLY good. I love the design on the characters, and the dialogue is a lot funnier than I expected. English may not be your first language but I don't think I caught any major grammatical or spelling errors.
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trent-redfern Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
-goes looking for this comic in local comic shop soon after reading-
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEEEEH!!!
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Seenshadows Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Man I can't wait for this comic book to come out.
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CrowClaws Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LOVING it so far, can't wait to read more!
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KIANDRU Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
AWSOME STUFF. is very catchy and I almost lost myself into it. i like the world you have created!
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YeriDG Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Didn't that ghost thing say the guy needed a friend? Having a voice in your head always
scolding you must be pretty bothersome :D
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VeiledInShadow Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
lol i love this panel
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Redde67 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Its very awesome comics and im ur greates fan but I lost when I read. I mean storrytelling))
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JuliaNemo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Want More T_T
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Nowio Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow... awesome! im just amazed for how fluently you can read the story!
and the characters are awesome, and their personalities seems to be very entertaining untill the end :D
stein and azriel are just... xD well, i gonna buy it ;D
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Xeitone Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Artist
LOl the voice in his head! TOO HILARIOUS!! CONTINUE!
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Shippuden23 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Love the argument his having with the spirit XD
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blausen Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
hauhauahuhauaa ok I decided! I like him! his a very nice guy to have around ! XD
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lances-wings Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist
This is great I'm definitly gonna buy it when it comes out :)
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Daydreamings Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So I'm deeply in love with this and need to read more, will it be released in print or is it going to be digital only?
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Aleru-92 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Reminds me of the magical feeling when i saw "A new Hope" for the first time. I guess kind sir that this will prove very entertaining!!!
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Misfit400 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This whole thing is so much full of win. <3<3 ^.^

Fantastic job ^.^
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MasterOfTheMiep Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great comic!
And a great sense of humour. Lol! XD
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zathraya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I take it you read Eragon? But whatever it's awesome none the less! :love:
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nebezial Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
i did not, movie scarred me for life
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zathraya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh geez! I sympathize with you. DX Horrible movie, should be burned and forgotten by history. But the books are good.
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nebezial Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
yeah i heard that the books are in fact much better,ill probably give them a chance sooner or lated.. that movie was just.. my god... a movie with a dragon that allmost put me to sleep...damn
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Killishandra Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Professional Filmographer
If you want good books about dragons you want the dragonriders of pern series. :) what inspired polini to begin with. Or the Tameriere series is pretty good.
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zathraya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I refuse to watch it but I've heard enough about it. D: But I'm glad they didn't destroy the next book in the series...yet.
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Treyos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I want my own set of those swords. Preferably without the voice from beyond. ;)
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Lillagon Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really enjoying this so far, its flowing really well and your art is amazing as usual. I cannot wait for its release. ^_^
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evilhedgehog2011 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
absolutely love it! can't wait for it to come out!
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JuhlallinenEnkeli Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
The looks on his friends' faces are priceless
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Luaprata91 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Azriel is really funny talking with stein LOL i'm really enjoying this
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