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Submitted: March 3, 2012
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ravine issue 1 page 26by *nebezial

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dialogue is temporary placeholder waiting for ron marz to finish the rewrite due to the fact that eloquent or not, english is my second language XD

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~MarcusOTerra Nov 15, 2012

I kinda like choppy english in a fantasy campaign; like the 'common' tongue is everyone's second language and there's bits of grammar fault as they all use what they need and leave out what they don't care about.

That's me as a writer; try getting an editor behind that idea.

~R-mor Mar 21, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

This is REALLY good. I love the design on the characters, and the dialogue is a lot funnier than I expected. English may not be your first language but I don't think I caught any major grammatical or spelling errors.