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ravine issue 1 text sample by nebezial ravine issue 1 text sample by nebezial
another text placeholder test, dialogues arent the final tweaked version... rins rewrite on these will read much better than my croat writing in english thing going on here XD

i know the story and what i want characters to say but , some things tend to get lost in translation
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varialome Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think the speech bubbles ruin the realistic feel of the comic
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Bracey100 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I cant wait for this! The artwork is glorious!
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kevinTUT Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
This page is really great. :worship:
But please don't use comic sans...It'll ruin the page. :cry:
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nebezial Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
im not gonna use any font XDD this is just placeholder stuff, im not the one whos doing the actual final lettering :)
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kevinTUT Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I see, Good luck with your awesome comic! :bounce:
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phrostie Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
getting closer
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SMerle Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Professional Photographer
incredible!
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AlishmcMalish Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...I can't even process how amazing this is 8l
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Magdalenafan2009 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks amazing ^_^
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chakradesign Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Forget about comic sans font! This wold not work well. You need profi fonts and I have them! Contact me!
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nebezial Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
oh but this is neither the final dialogue--thats being done by ron marz, nor real leterring

this is just placeholder stuff for ron to get a feel of the scene and really do his magic :)

im not gonna be doing the lettering
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ryujack134 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dude...you are so awesome
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Michael7S Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011   Interface Designer
:omfg: WOW! :)
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Zhaanman Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Out-Standing scene set up and style love it!
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ErebusRed Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
This looks great!!
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ramstudios1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Very life like great work!
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KlausTeufel Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Beautiful artwork for a comic. And having read it, I want to read the final comic.
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dinshino Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Must buy!
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Angel7777777 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Well done! Love it! :clap:
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stronus Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
i miss ur valiable addition to dA but i now u r swamped in work. so best of luck
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adelnovipazar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
oo ma Gosh....nebezial you finaly rememberd us,when is ravine coming out... answer me ??? :(
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zodiac2000 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
comic saaaanssss! >_<! love the the artwork tho xD
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nebezial Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
place-holdeeeeeer...im not the one wholl do the actual leterring XDDXDX
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Luaprata91 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
people don't read the comments, EVER! lol
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DeimosComics Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011   General Artist
I love the art and the frame around the page!
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Treyos Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Looks fantastic! Can't wait to get my hands on the books! Have to say, though, that I'm glad you're having someone go over the dialogue. Grammar is an art unto itself and I twitch every time I see an error. ;P
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nebezial Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
there is more than grammar to a well written dialogue, and that is why i need ron above all
in croatian i can make this stuff into a friggin poetry, but translation never really captures the idea perfectly... so i just overexplain stuff so that ron can get the idea behind it all and then really make it sing :))))
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Treyos Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very true. At least you'll be able to look at his revisions and understand it. I've seen people's work get translated into languages that they couldn't speak themselves and they just have to trust the translators to have done the job right. ;P
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NicholasClane Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
What is this epic and godlike masterpice?
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TommyPhillips Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
I love the reflection on the armor \ last panel
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Rburrows Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
This is gorgeous
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ArtisansdAzure Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Nice work, look great
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Araphiel Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
I really really can't wait for Ravine to come out!!!! It's going to be SO FREAKING EPIC!!!!!!!!!!! I know it!!!! :D
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LoN-Kamikaze Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it would work better if he just said himself what torments him.
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nebezial Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
to the air surrounding him? anyways this is something being recapped by a certain someone... its not just random spamming of captions :)
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LoN-Kamikaze Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure, I'm talking to myself all the time. Helps me structure my thoughts.
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WingedGenesis5 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Wow, this is a really neat page. I particularly like the second and third panel and the back light behind them
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thew40 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, when is this awesome-ness coming out? I gotta add it to my comic pull list.
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